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How and why?

You know the situation: the video player timer is broken. You need to have your favourite programme taped, as you're going out, but your mum's hopeless - she just can't remember how to use the video. So you're going to have to leave her instructions on how to operate the video recorder.

In the following list, click to put a tick beside the statement if you think it's important when writing instructions - leave it blank if you don't (you can click again in the box to change your mind).

1. Adding some jokes to your instructions.
2. Writing your instructions in the right order.
3. Giving a detailed description of what the video player looks like.
4. Making your writing clear and easy to understand.
5. Showing off your knowledge of the technical side of the video.
6. Giving direct and simple commands/directions.


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The Good and the bad
Now you know what to look out for, read the two sets of instructions below. Decide which you think is more successful and why. Click on the button when you have decided.

    (A) Mum. Let's see if we can get it right this time. I don't want to be watching Des O'Connor like last time! You need to put the video in the machine and then press the record button. That's the small red one which is a little to the left of the play button, which looks like a Smartie with an arrow on it - you can't miss it. The stop button is just below the play button, I think. Oh, by the way, don't forget to rewind the tape first, and you'll need to change the channel too probably.

    (B) Put the tape in the machine.
    Press rewind and wait until the rewinding has finished.
    Change the channel to 5.
    The record button is the red one in the top left corner. Press it.
    Check the recording light is on.
    Press stop when the programme has finished.

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In command
Extract B also makes frequent use of verbs which command - sometimes known as verbs in the imperative form.

This is the form of the verb which tells you to do something. For example:

  • eat this
  • let go
  • come on.

Often they come at the start of a sentence. They make it clear what a person should do, so you can probably see why they are useful for instructions.

Look again at extract B below. The verbs have been put in bold for you. Tick those verbs which are in the command/imperative by clicking in the box beside the verb.

Put the tape in the machine.
Press rewind and wait until the rewinding has finished.
Change the channel to 5.
The record button is the red one in the top left corner.
Press it.
Check recording light is on.
Press stop when the programme has finished.


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Good timing
Instructions are usually written in the present tense, as though the action is happening now. E.g. 'The record button is the one...'

Sometimes the future tense is used. E.g. 'You will need to prepare...'

Look at these examples. Click in the boxes to show the verbs which are in the future tense. If you change your mind, click in the box again.

1. In this recipe, you will need two eggs.
2. Ensure they are fresh eggs.
3. When the water is boiling, place them in the pan.
4. They will be cooked in four minutes.


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The right order
Putting instructions into the right order is vital. You could cause irritation, and even real problems for your reader, if you don't get it right.

Your mum has decided to get her own back. She has left some instructions for you on how to clean the car. However, they are a bit of a jumble and they could be a lot clearer. Put them into the right order by numbering them 1 to 6. Your mum will be delighted to see how you can improve her writing!

a. Using the chamois leather, polish the car until it sparkles.
b. Wash the car thoroughly.
c. First clean the inside of the car with the vacuum cleaner.
d. Fill with soapy water.
e. Then fetch a bucket from the garage.
f. Rinse the car with clean water.


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Put it to the test
So now you should be aware of what type of writing is needed in order to create successful instructions.

Let's see if you can write a clear set of instructions of your own.

First here are some tips:

  • work out the right order for your instructions
  • keep your sentences short and simple
  • number your instructions if you wish
  • use command verbs
  • use the present or sometimes the future tense
  • present your writing clearly.

Choose one of these tasks.

1. Write instructions for a new student on how to get from one part of your school to another, e.g. from your classroom to the library.

2. Write out a recipe for a pen pal for one of your favourite dishes.

3. Choose a useful computer program and write instructions on how to use it for a friend.

You are allowed to use up to ten different instructions. Write your instructions in your notebook.

Write a title: 'Instructions on how to ...'

Type of instructions

Title:

Instructions:


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